The lights went off and when the turned back on no one was there. Then they all came out and there was a lot of firework and it was so loud I could not hear my mum talk. Then they all came out and they scared my mum my sister and I. When they were in the middle of the grass they were lined up in country's. Then this man came up and talk and I had no idea who it was. When I looked at them they had big smiles and they did not stop. Then the man that was talking when off and all the Olympics athletes went out in a big line. then there was more fireworks. Then there was another man that was talking about the Olympics. Then he went off and there was a lot of music.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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