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Monday, 2 December 2019

Creative Writing

Today Miss Birtch taught us how to write a paragraph with 4 sentences.  

I see mountains with green nearly brown colored grass spread out all over it and the bright blue sky behind. In the dark blue sea there are a lot of of boats floating in the water. On the bottom I can see a mountain with bright green trees. When I look around I see heaps of people swimming and having a good time. 

My name is Paige, I have Blonde hair darker at the top lighter down the bottom, I also have green eyes and I come here every weekend because my grandparents have a batch out here. I love to explore, I love the views you get to look at when you get up high and see the whole city. One day I went out for a walk and found a path I have never found before. When I got to the end of the path there was a old house I looked like no one lived there, as you know I love to explore so I went inside the house. 

When I was about to open the door a lady who looked like she was in her late 30's opened the door. She was yelling and screaming at someone in the house, she turned around a saw me. She just walked straight past me like I wasn't there. Then she was about to get in her car but she screamed again and ran over to me when I was walking away " HELP ME!" she said running towards me. 

When I turned around she was standing their crying, I was so confused I had no idea what was going on. There was a little kid walking out holding a dead rat. The lady screamed again and ran behind me. The little kid started to laugh but the lady was crying in fear. I asked " What's wrong." she said " I don't like rats, my cat killed a rat and brought it in then my daughter Lily picked it up and started running after me." I picked up the rat through it of the cliff and helped the lady then went home for a long shower. 

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