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Thursday, 19 October 2017

Bye Old School Hello New School!

WALT: In our poem we had to include a simile, Alliteration and emotion words.

Yesterday in literacy we wrote a poem about our new school. We had to include what we felt, smell, see, hear and touch.  Our school is called Te mānu Tukutuku. I put a simile in my poem to make it more interesting.

Bye old school hello new school!


As I walk into our brand new school I feel scared.


At our new school I could see the senior fort, now I see the new playground’s that our nothing like our old school.


At our new school I could feel the rough walls, now I can feel the soft smooth wall.


At our old school it smelt like sweat and grossness, now it smells refreshing.


At our old school I could hear the neighbour’s dog barking like a maniac, now I can hear children scream with joy.

I feel proud to be here because when I am older I can say that I was one of the first people to leave this school.  

By Paige

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