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Friday, 15 December 2017

Running out of time

For the last week or so we have been make a story. We used a dice to choose our characters, Settings and problem. Our walt is to use and learn how to use speech marks.


Running out of time

CRUNCH CRUNCH went the snow under the grinch's green hideous feet. “ I wonder what the grinch is doing here in the cold misty night.” thought the snowman. Suddenly the grinch started running and the snowman started to follow. “ OH NO! what is he doing in santa's slay.” said the snowman.
“ Where is santa’s sack, oh there it is”. said the grinch. The snowman looked in the slay and he saw that the sack of presents were gone. “ Where is santa I need to tell him that the grinch has his sack.” said the snowman.

“Ok where will santa be… Oh I know his village.” Said the snowman.
“HAHAHAHA, I am so glad I am getting away with this.” Whispered the grinch. The snowman looked all around Santa’s village but he was nowhere. The snowman started to think that Santa when to deliver the presents without his sack. “ HOHOHO merry christmas!” Shouted Santa.
“ Ah I found him YAY.” Said the snowman. “ SANTA SANTA over here.” Shouted the snowman.
“ Oh Hello.” Said Santa.
“ Santa the grinch has your sack we need to find him.” Said the snowman.

While the snowman is telling santa what has happened, the grinch is putting terrible toys under peoples tree’s. “ Come on hop in my slay and we can track him down.” Said santa.
“ Where do you think he is Santa.” Said the snowman.
“ I found him,  there he is” Said Santa. When they were going to park the slay the snowman jumped out when the slay was close to the ground and Santa followed after him. “ Why do you have to hate christmas.” Asked Santa.
“ I hate christmas because it is boring.” Said the grinch.
“ But have you ever celebrated christmas before.” Asked the snowman.
“No.” Said the grinch.
“ Well you can come and celebrate christmas with us if you want to but if you don’t then don’t ruin it for other people.” Said Santa.

“ Ok I will celebrate christmas with you but only if I can help you deliver the presents.” Said the grinch. “Ok I guess so.” said Santa. Then they started delivering the presents to the children and continued doing for many years and the grinch

Friday, 24 November 2017

Alarm Call

This week we had 2 activity's to do. The first activity that we had to do was think of a twist from the picture that we got showed and draw a picture of what our twist is. The 2nd activity that we had to do was write a story about the picture and the story has to be about what the twist is that  you made.

Cuddles

STOMP STOMP! “Oooops I need to be quiet I can’t wake up Mr Paws”. Ahhh Mr Paws is so cute when he is sleeping. I can’t step on him because I will squash him like a squashed banana. I need to quietly lie down and go to sleep. I need to get the bright pink dotty pillow so I can use it. I should just wait until he wakes up because he needs his cutey rest.

Then Mr Paws woke up and found the goblin snoring as loud as a horn. Mr Paws tried and tried to wake the goblin up but it didn’t work so Mr Paws started to play with the balls of string. After that Mr paws went back to sleep but then the goblin rolled over and swished Mr Paws.

After that the goblin woke up,  he saw Mr Paws legs under his beard. He lifted up his beard and found Mr Paws sleeping on the pink dotty pillow with the balls of string next to him.